All Comments on 'From a Jack to a Queen Ch. 01'

by bjmichaels

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent!

Looking forward to the next chapter. I like the pace you have set and am quite hard thinking about the path on which his is being led!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE!

Great read. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Promising.

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago
Great song choice..for a title.

From a Jack to a Queen,

From loneliness to a wedding ring,

You played and ace and I won a Queen,

You made me king of your heart.

Ah the memories of hearing that song when I read your title. Heheheh..yeah I am that old.

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago

Ps ok I know I changed the title of the song somewhat. The song actually stated from a Jack to a King. :-)

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