All Comments on 'From Across the Bar'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You gotta appreciate a sense of humour.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You gotta appreciate a sense of humour.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice story! Hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story, not to sure how I'd feel about the unsafe sex with a stranger though. But it was an intense read, and Congrats to Dennis for tripping on the wild side. Does the story end here or is there a morning after encore?

DefaultWhiteBoyDefaultWhiteBoyover 1 year agoAuthor

Damn, in re-reading this noticed how many mistakes I made. Missing punctuation everywhere. I need to be better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another wimp why am I not surprised

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