All Comments on 'From Almost Daughter to Lover'

I like the story a lot. Are you doing a follow up. AAAA++++

Good story!

4

Really liked it, but felt like it jumped into the sex real quick and accepting

I like the story. I do feel it was rushed and lacked build up to what I think would likely start as an awkward reunion; with Joe learning to look past the little girl he once knew and that type of relationship. I think you can continue use this story but slow it down a bit.

Sorry, but this just doesn’t make much sense. Prospective father re-meets possible daughter and they fall instantly in romantic love — After 20 years? Implausible.

Five stars from me, get your fingers going on the laptop writing away!!!

I couldn't decide between a 4 and a 5, but I gave you the benefit of the doubt and gave this story a 5. Another chapter is a must.

definitely needs to continue...

Great Happy story! Where's the rest of it?

Very nice. I agree that it seems implausible, and that it deserves a few more chapters. Maybe that is the assignment: write several more chapters that resolve the implausibility. Maybe there is something in each one's more recent past that explains their willingness to jump into bed immediately. Maybe he recently got out of a bad relationship and has been dreaming of the best one he ever had. Maybe she thought of him not just as a father but as the image of the perfect husband. I mean all this to be helpful. You have a great start and I look forward to the next installment! :-)

Write more to this story it is excellent reading material

Great story as it stands, but more would be welcomed.

5*

Tc

A great start to what promises to be a great story!

More please