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All Comments on 'From Darker Places than I Want to Feel Ch. 06'

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ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 5 years ago
The story is great

I am glad you reposted it. Thanks

SGTBurdSGTBurdover 2 years ago

A very good story! I am impressed with the way it is written. I did not notice any edit issues. Some of the jump backs took a minute to catch up with. I suggest an indicater when one of these jumps happen. Maybe an asterisk between paragraphs.

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