All Comments on 'From Fantasy to Flesh'

I'm glad I got to read this. It's not the kind of story I would usually seek out, but that made it better. I look forward to reading more.

So hot. I look forward to reading more.

For those of us who have had intense online relationships, you nailed it!

Thank you! It came from a very personal experience. I'm glad it translated.

It translated wonderfully!

Wonderfully written, with all the right details. Your characters are well-rounded and fully-realized, making the story that much more intimate. Well done, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

And why exactly this is not rated at 4.99??

This is what each and every one us dream of - we meet online, we play, we become each other's everything. The online time becomes the only time we feel really alive. And then it is time to take the next step.

Sometimes we get scared and hide. We make excuses why we couldn't or why we shouldn't. And everything just fades away.

Sometimes we take the next step, but the chemistry that was in the written words does not translate to the RL and it all falls apart crashing and burning.

But sometimes it works. The magic is there and even stronger, when the touch can be felt and the whispered words can heard, not just read on the screen.

Thank you for reminding us all, that sometimes, just sometimes, those late night dreams do come true.

There should be a term for this that we can all add to our signatures. It should be something short, but equivalent to "my altimate goal is to end up in PLP's story. If you are looking for something else, please move on, don't waste my time."

Wow, I just saw this and my face is burning. Thank you so much!

!over your hot story...so we'll written. Would love to hear from you.. I am an older guy who enjoys a hot lady like you.. Email me and let's be friends...jimsmigh44@gmail.com

Jim

Really enjoy you’re writing

The online relationship is so hot the only thing I don’t like

When you think you have something special with someone and then they ghost you

Just say it was fun while it lasted but I’m going in a new direction or something similar

I hate to be ghosted

Would like to set up something with you if you are interested

Very hot!

Very erotic, arousing. Made even more so in that I have a long term Lit relationship which might..

oh perchance to dream.

Well, it is twice as long as it should be isn’t it? Maybe it’s my phone? I think you copied and pasted it twice?

Also? Will’s a dick for not letting you cum into his mouth, and then after they entering you again for another (mutual?) orgasm

Off to read your other work

This sounded like the beginning to a wonderful meeting. Where’s the rest?

An wonderful story, and I guess you couldn't have written it without having experienced something very similar. Pretty well written, too. So why did get such low ratings? For some people, the intro might too long, possibly in your other story, too - not for me, I like it in both -, and it might have required a bit of polishing, editing, plus the fact that you pasted it twice. People get annoyed by such things. Five stars from me

Such a great story. Who doesn't daydream about meeting an online obsession and them being everything you hope for?