All Comments on 'From Fuckbuddies To Lovers'

Loved this. Glad that Jodi and Damon found their happy ending, even if they did meet on a fuck buddy site at the start.

Good “tell” tale but it suffered from a lack of dialogue and connection with their emotions. The reader reads how they felt from a distance rather than experiencing it through their discussions and personal interactions with each other. That could improve the connection between the characters and the reader and how the reader views and cares about them. Just a suggestion to keep in mind for future stories.

This is a wonderfully written story which does more than share the passionate needs of two people, who start out wanting to fuck, but need to find each other,. However, what makes this story stand out is the backdrop of these ghastly times with C19. No spoilers, but will PM my appreciation. OMG, it was beautifully written.

SouthernCrossfire, bear in mind, this was from Jodi’s POV about the whole relationship :)

Not a story, just an outline. Great potential but lacking in every other aspect.