All Comments on 'From John to Jenny'

If you took the trouble to learn how punctuation works this might have been readable. It wasn't, so I didn't. I skimmed through it, but it didn't merit even that much attention. An old, tired plot-line; a poorly written.story.

Not bad for your first. A good appetizer. Keep pushing, refining your craft, and do not for any reason, give two fucks about what other people want. The best way to write erotic fiction is to just let it go and definitely ignore people who care that much about punctuation

Don't hate them, they just haven't been laid in a while... or maybe they just hate you, idk. Either way, do you really care what they think beyond pushing a couple buttons to fix readability?

Thank you for the feedback guys, I will try to be more careful in the future.This was my first attempt at writing erotic fiction, so perhaps I have some way to go.

I so agree that some people need to get laid on here...