All Comments on 'From My Mom to My Co-Wife Pt. 06'

I gave you 4 stars because I think Mike's first time with your mother should of been better described. This what I think most readers were waiting to reaf.

Both wives need to be showing a baby bump

This is a sex story site. You need to give more details. I am disappointed with the stories because of this. More details!!!!!

Reading this is like waiting for the dentist. Can it go any slower or be any drier. He needs to kick up the sex. Gawd fuck the cunt already.

I can see what you're trying to do here but it's full effect eludes me. There's no discussion of the emotional dynamics in play or where they go from here. I keep giving each part 4*, but I'm starting to have my doubts this story will ever reach its full potential. Definitely would help to have someone as editor, for grammar at a minimum.

Please write the next part soon

A couple more chapters and it'll be down to a dozen words. Needs to be made into an actual story, edited properly. It's pretty dire. 1*

AAAAA+++