All Comments on 'From Naval Air to the Ranch'

This story rates another chapter ... perhaps a disastrously hurricane and now Hank becomes his son's guardian? Or? Good 1st story.

small point, but was it 25 years service or 22 and 3/4 years service

jackie43 I myself having spent 21 years in Naval Aviation and 5 deployments to Vietnam, appreciate your story. You have only touched a small segment of what it is like for your family when you walk out that door and step on that steel flight deck. I did not become a plane captain until I retired and went to work for a contractor but it was still Naval Aviation helping to train those kids to become Naval aviators. Would like to see another chapter and let us know how things are going for the new family that Hank has helped to create. NO bad vibes are allowed in the follow up Only happy times for all

Nice story and pretty well written for your first effort on Lit. The ending was a little too abrupt, with lots of room for a longer ending - or perhaps future chapters. Thanks for sharing.

Well, jackie43, I think you're off to a "cat" start! I like the story just as it is.

Unusual circumstance, but what a fun mental exercise. Keep it up!

Good story, well written and with very few errors. Merits a sequel, and I agree it needs to keep everyone happy with the situation. Try to include more sexual emotion now - the sexual piece is too narrative, and don’t rush endings. Thanks.

A great first story! Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.