by VirginiaS
I agree with you... she has The greatest life ever.
I can only hope that you join her.
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This is not erotic, but it is sick, it totally lacks any arousing depictions, and those are its better qualities!
There is a whole bevy of words that cover this piece of debris: Lame, Moronic, STUPID, idiotic, a waste of time, and perhaps the most appapro’ TOTALLY WORTHLESS!
Other than that it’s great!
This is the first of your stories I've read, but I see that you wrote many years ago, and have now returned. I'll go read some of the others next.
I love stories where a married couple get seduced by 2 or more other men. In my favorites, the husband gets abused, too, but I can't fault you for not writing something that you didn't intend to write.
You might enjoy one of my stories,
DonaldElliott11
Gotta love the anonymous comments.... they come in here and trash what we write for them, yet they are too scared to use a signon name...
Here is a hint, if you can do better, PLEASE do.... If not, go somewheres else.
I’m anonymous because I can’t log on but I wanted to say I LOVE THIS STORY! I’ve known girls this has happened to and introduced a few to black men I knew knowing that’s what would. The speed and control they use to get her is exciting to watch.
Love your stories.
So hot how they take her from her white husband and own her. Teaching her real quick what her purpose is while her husband listens to her being broken in.