by lola9824
Great story with much potential. Will this develop further? There are so many things that could happen.
Oooh you naughty girl Lola, keep it going. I'd love the poor girl to get some humiliation in front of her sister or mom... oooh poor poor girl. So delicious.
Mandy might accidentally find out she is actually a virgin? oh no, what will Mandy do to fix that situation...
I hope there’s more! I really like this series, and can’t wait to see what happens in the morning!
I hope there’s going to be more! Maybe Mandy has some friends over and she shows off her obedient little pet to them…
Great story. I hope there is more. I agree I'd love to see her Mistress show her off to her friends. Maybe make her a centerpiece at a party.
I really liked this story. The sub is reluctant and the humiliation is delicious. I hope there are more installments. The dom-sub dynamic of this fictional couple is, well, arousing. Thanks for the 2 parts you've written.
Wish it was longer! I agree I liked the humiliation and think having friends over to witness would be great.
Nice read. Can only add myself to the readers wishing for a continuation. Although i'd prefer just a bit more of them together in their new 'routine'.
Anyway keep up the writing - it was entertaining to read!