All Comments on 'From Soccer to Sucker Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The situation between Valeria and Jake is developing interestingly, you can see that Valeria already has a strong hand on Jake's life. And the distraction, Jake's poor game ⚽ and the constant thought of Valeria lead him into even more trouble, absent-mindedness. Will Valeria lead to Jake's complete downfall? I really like the story about Valeria 👧 and Jake, I wish I was Jake 🧒. I'm already looking forward to the next parts of Jake and Valeria's adventures with great interest. Greetings from Poland, SissyBoy from Warsaw. 💕

Ciekawie się rozwija sytuacja pomiędzy Valerią a Jake'm, widać że Valeria już mocno trzyma rękę na życiu Jake. A rozproszenie, słaba gra Jake ⚽ i ciągła myśl o Valerii wprowadza go jeszcze w większe kłopoty, rozstargnienie. Czy Valeria doprowadzi do całkowitego upadku Jake'a? Bardzo podoba Mi się historia o Valerii 👧 i Jaku, chciałbym być na miejscu Jake'a 🧒. Już z niecierpliwością i wielkim zainteresowaniem czekam na kolejne części losów Jake i Valerii? Pozdrawiam z Polski, SissyBoy z Warszawy. 💕

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I'm sorry, the type of guy the Jake character is, would have said, "good luck and fuck off." He would have played off her video like any college kid dressing in drag does, every day of the week. I was drunk and having fun. Instead It's like he has a split personality. A college jock just wouldn't give a shit enough, not to knock off a new piece of ass and move on.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Let her drop the video, contact the authorities, Valeria gets hauled off to the pokey, Jake tells everyone he knew what was happening all along.

"Valeria was a lesbian man hating feminist who only wanted to bring down every guy at the school whenever she got the chance. I got wind of it, lost the bet on purpose to set her up and took one for the team with that video to get her the hell out of here. You're welcome."

Take a writing course at least.

One other thing, writing comments that praises your work under "Anonymous" is whole new low for bottom of the barrel scraping.

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