by MinuetLora
Very touching story. I enjoyed it a lot and am really anxious to read future chapters. If I could suggest, perhaps you might include more details in the actual sex acts and draw out the sex a little longer. Personally, when reading something like this it's fun to masturbate to but only if there's a long slow build up with plenty of emotional and sex-filled scenes allowing a person long enough to build to their own climax. You have some great work here though and I really look forward to reading more of your work, both with continued chapters from these characters as well as other non-related stories. :) Thanks!
it was good to see a angry mother show love to her hearting daughter