by ceset
This is very well done, I confess I haven’t read all of this. It’s incredibly intense and dramatic and I found the characters to be very plausible and relatable, it was easy to empathise with Anna’s character.
The reason I stopped reading is more of a personal one, I love Reluctance stories but blackmail and bullying is a huge turn off for me. It’s relatively easy to predict where this kind of story leads obviously there are different options/ directions that it could lead to but she’s likely to end up as a victim and that is more than a turn off For me. I guess I’m going to have to put this on hold for now and wait and see what direction you take. Best of luck with your writing.
Tess (UK)
Omg please continue this story, the emotion is so real and the story itself is quite interesting. Love it!!
Thank you guys for the comments! I really appreciate it. I do have more of this story already written, I’m just trying to figure out this site, it’s very different than the others I post in
Oh, heck yeah. This is some good shit-- some sexy and explicit Jane Eyre vibes going on right now.
Some nice little details you've left too, just enough to make me curious about a few things I'm sure you'll elaborate on eventually. :p
absolutely amazing, I'm in love! all the perfect categories together for me! cannot wait for a part 2 x
Great beginning to what I hope becomes an epic story.
It's very exciting to read new and talented authors here. I hope you have many more stories for us to indulge.
Deep, dark and delicious. You leave no detail spared. I’m used to CNC and this is a tad darker. I feel for Anna’s degradation, but there is also power to her. Hope she realizes it. Simply cannot wait to see what you have in store.
This seems like it should be in the BDSM category, unless in the end it doesn't end do well for the wolf ;)
I love this story! I'm so excited to see more of Anna and Robert. You did a fantastic job!