All Comments on 'Frozen... And Then Thawed'

More please, maybe sister Jenny would like some too and fall for her brother.

Fantastic job! This was a really good read and I hope that there is more! Thank you!

This was actually a really well-written, albeit short, story. Though, I would have enjoyed it a lot more, had you simply stuck to 'Mom' and 'Aunt' instead of 'Claire' and 'Judy'.

I kinda have to ask what the point of writing an incest stroke story is, if your MC then has to mentally disassociate himself from his familial bonds with those women. For that, this was way too little of a plot.

I liked the story not the title

Really needs more dialogue with Mum she was way to eager. He had his blackmail card and never had to use it. It would be interesting if he was able to modify their body hair, make Mum & Judy dress sexier , wear makeup, which then makes the father interested and the blackmail threat can escalate as he controls his mother & aunt.

Superb, perhaps your best yet, thank you.

During the 40s my mother and aunt attended the " practicing" parties with their girlfriends. At times they'd pair off.

You took a simple, potentially cliché plot and made something steamy of it. Thanks.

It's the author's story and he'll do with it what he wishes, but I'd be delighted if he makes the dad and uncle get out of the picture, for example when it is found out that they are cheating. Or will be the more habitual story in which the dad and uncle swap wives and include the kids in the mix?

Wow!! What a great story, brings my fuking my mother and her younger sister. Dad and Uncle have no idea what happens when they are not home. I have all the wild sex I want any time I want.

Nicely done, Good mom, son, auntie sex story, there were a few wording errors, not Euro-English to American English, just a few general text errors. The story definitely deserves a chapter 2, if that's the way you're thinking.

Awesome story, would love to read part two the day away golfing, and maybe part three with sister home from uni?

That's a shame. No anal sex.......

Fantastic story, it is begging for follow up chapters.

Like the story, very teasing. 5/5

Creative story but wordy. Definitely could use an editor look through. Appreciate you sharing this tale with us.