by Vinballe
This story was only 2 pages not 5, 3 & 4 were repeating pages 1 & 2 and then page 5 only says to be continued. What a dud 3 pages of nothing .
dont know were you found the other sides, i can only se 2 of them, and i'm egerly waiting on next part, and as a fellow swed all i can say is good writing(bra skrivet)
Boring, and vanilla. You should have left the masturbation and anal out of it, and then PT it in a different category.
This is a volunteer site. This fellow's first one. Give him a break. Good story. Hope the naysayers haven't stopped you sir.