All Comments on 'Frozen Stepdaughter Tucks In Pt. 01'

by Vinballe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story was only 2 pages not 5, 3 & 4 were repeating pages 1 & 2 and then page 5 only says to be continued. What a dud 3 pages of nothing .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Eagerly awaiting chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

dont know were you found the other sides, i can only se 2 of them, and i'm egerly waiting on next part, and as a fellow swed all i can say is good writing(bra skrivet)

sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

Boring, and vanilla. You should have left the masturbation and anal out of it, and then PT it in a different category.

dasnenosdasnenosover 2 years ago

This is a volunteer site. This fellow's first one. Give him a break. Good story. Hope the naysayers haven't stopped you sir.

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A middle-aged man with a young mind. I love incest roleplay and other non-pain kinks. I have a few fantasies that I will try to publish here. Feedback that I can use to improve my work is highly appreciated.