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smart move on your part to see how many people are following the the story,bad move as there are not to many people that would catch this and think you just left the story as is you have talant this kind off switch should should be left to the also rans. you want a following, respect the following

almost skip this did not realise that it was offspring with it being fspring but i did do a double look and liked it

I was beginning to fear this story had been abandonned like so many others (much to my dismay), so glad to see you continuing on. Keep up the good work.

lol I see some interesting twist coming if I guessed correct. I cant wait

Love your story and eagerly awaiting the next chapter