by Samuelx
...we'd see this cut/paste submission before long.
More about Ottawa, Carleton Uni., yada, yada, yada. The author is quirky and weird thinking this spam constitutes a story and a reader would be quirky and weird to think it's more than a 1*. Since you love 1s, here ya go, Spam-u-elX.
Trans men are not women. Transphobic asshole
As a fucking ftm trans guy nothing infuriates me more than seeimg someome portray us like whores or shitty characters in a YA novel. Theres so much shit just blatantly fucking wrong about this I could write you a fucking essay about how borderline immoral this shit is. Maybe I'm being harsh but perhaps do some fuckin research about a group before you write erotica about them. Once again maybe I'm being a little harsh, but seriously I couldnt think of many things that would make this more fucking offensive.
(Ive also nevee met a trans person that referred to themself as a "transsexual" its pretty much always "transgender" they also probably won't type out the whole "female to male transsexual" we would almost 100% of the time say "trans ftm" instead)
yeah dude fiction like this is super harmful to trans men. especially referring to us as “male-identified women”. please delete this and maybe talk to a trans person or like google “transgender” before writing about stuff you don’t know anything about.
Genuinely delete this. I don't even have the words to explain how gross it is. Fertilization is STILL transphobia. Educate yourself.
As an ftm individual myself, the term "male-identified female" is almost exclusively used by TERFs* and other transphobes who wish to deny us our identities, which is a bad start. I also find it odd how you specified the protagonist's pronouns were they/them. Not that trans men can't use they/them pronouns, it's just that most of us use he/him because it's more gender-affirming.
I also find the casual misogyny ("Most of my friends are male and I have no use for female friends with their drama, their fake ways and their bullshit.") a bit off-putting. Admittedly, I was like this in high school because I tried to distance myself from anything female or feminine.
The term "transsexual" is pretty outdated. It is still used, albeit rarely, to specifically refer to transgender individuals who have had gender confirmation surgery.
*TERFs are self-proclaimed feminists who claim trans women are men invading women's space and trans men are lost lesbian sisters - both erroneous beliefs
this is fucking appalling dude your writing sucks and it's transphobic as fuck