All Comments on 'Fuck Island'

more like a story outline, needs dialogue, etc

Great concept, could have been a great story too. Just too much homosexual contact between the guys. I kind of foresaw where it was going. The minute I realized the daughter was the ONLY female allowed on the island. Then it was confirmed the first night the son was allowed to visit. That's as far as I got.. I don't read or get off on sausage fests... You should have included some female relatives...

Also, get an editor... The serious amount of typos in what little I read, tells me that either your editor(s) suck, or you didn't have any.

9 inch cock? You just lost all your readers before you even started.

Dewey Cheatham

This got me even harder. Shame there wasn’t an aunt or something for some lesbian sex. I’d love hearing about some more masturbation too