All Comments on 'Fucked at My Son's Soccer Game'

by ThatBoi21

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 6 years ago
Wishing!

Wishing I could have a MILF like Lisa! But the cougars go for the young studs and not us old geezers! Enjoyed the story! Thanks! Rated it a 5.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
LOL

watching a soccer match is like watching a track meet that doesn't have a finish line.

this story is about as lame and uninteresting.

dispatcher59dispatcher59about 6 years ago
What would be cool

Is if Lisa gave her husband a round of sloppy seconds that evening.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hopeful

I'm hoping there's a continued story here. A sequel or something would be nice

TeenStudforOlderWomenTeenStudforOlderWomenabout 6 years ago
Great Stoty

This was a great story. The detailed description of the sex between Logan and Lisa was incredible. Hopefully, you will continue to write more about Logan's exploits with Lisa and other older woman. This story made my cock very happy this morning.

STARBLACKSTARBLACKabout 6 years ago
great start

part 2 he gets her anal cherry. been married and never had her ass touched

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
clearly unrealistic situation

1. no locker rooms at youth soccer games. They're lucky to have a port-a-potty nearby

2. No one even remotely connected to soccer, I mean no one, says that the score is 3-2 "points."

3. Cheer leaders at a soccer game? LOL

4. Referees don't tell players to sit out for a while. The coach gets called onto the field when there's a injury and he decides whether the player comes out or not.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Interesting

Do not be discouraged by some various interpretations of soccer field's facilities.

You have introduced 2 characters that can be developed together or individual storyline.

Looking forward to reading more of these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Gteat

Loved the story and I hope there’s more to cum! It’s so beautiful when a married woman starts fucking outside of her marriage!

devilspydevilspyabout 6 years ago
Good job

Hot married MILF, now heading home. Hope she feeds cuckold all that fresh hot young cum in her pussy. Make him clean her as she thinks about that thick long cock. Cuckold just needs to get use to it.

ThatBoi21ThatBoi21about 6 years agoAuthor
Just wanted to address my mistakes

So, I originally started the story as being a football game, but decided to switch it to soccer because I thought it'd be more fun, so that's why cheerleaders are there (Forgot to remove them.) The rest of the mistakes come from my lack of knowledge about sports though lol.

Still, thank you for your feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice story

Nice story. I feel it would be hotter if he had work harder to seduce her. She gave to him with not much more than flirting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pt 2?

A part two would be great...don't make us wait too long! Your writing is descriptive which is engaging for the reader

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good place to post it

Good thing you didn't post this in Loving Wives, those folks would be all over you "how dare you write such trash" etc

The sex was written particularly well, keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Great story, need more followups, she could loan him to her friends and his friends could take turns on her.

FamilyLover260FamilyLover260almost 5 years ago

Was kinda hoping she'd get pregnant, but over all a great sexy story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
So many

There are so many moms like Lisa in the world! I am a tight end senior in high school and I banged seven older women last season! The amazing thing is a forty six year old really fat three hundred pound mom is going to have my baby!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

when is the next part

shang40shang40over 4 years ago

I want to be Lisa getting seduced and later fucked in van by muscled Logan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great start

Need a second chapter get more of the team involved or sons team

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
So what did you do with

The Red Card your husband gave you when you got thrown out of the house when you tried to go in the front door?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Used the remote to lock the van?

Doing that would also arm the Alarm, if the van has one.

Any movement within the van would then cause the Alarm to go off, which might just attract some attention!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More?

Part 2 and more would be great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great!

I now have read 3 stories from you and I a have enjoyed all. Exactly what I am seeking for, love your style. Please continue writing, would also certainly like a story with multiple chapters, seeing how things develop, could be great if it is something you could consider.

Thanks again and stay save.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

banging a boy who injured your son and cheating on your husband typical scummy wife and diaper baby boy who needs a throat punch

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Typical boy fantasy story, really unrealistic. Too many boys having mommy issues these days.

HowVeryTattvaHowVeryTattvaalmost 3 years ago

Fantastic story! The kid was just the right blend of cockiness and charm. Well done!

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 2 years ago

This was so bad it should have been listed under "Loving Wife". Such a SLUT! no stars

NeverenuffouNeverenuffouover 2 years ago

I like the idea but there were so many things that took me out of the story because they would just never happen that way. That’s fine, this is fiction. But it would’ve been received so much better (and, in my opinion, been so much hotter) with a few changes to make it more “realistic”.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Will you continue this story?? Part 2? I would love that! Plus with more details on the sex! Thank you for a great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great love story about a Horny under fucked Milf. Five Stars hope we get a Sequel RW

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great Story about a Cheating Horny Wife Needs her Pussy ate a Couple times a day to please her and then Fuck her tell it sore. Five Stars RW

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great Story about a Cheating Wife that is not satisfied proably not getting her pussy licked or having her pussy pounded tell it was sore. FIVE STARS let’s have a sequel, RW

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lisa is a 41 year old under Fucked Hot MILF. She hasn’t been getting enough attention her dimwit husband doesn’t eat her pussy and doesn’t keep her satisfied so she cheats. She got satisfied at the soccer game. She needs a Baby Bump it’s a great Love Story. Five Stars we need a second chapter. RW

rbell42rbell42about 2 years ago

Great story. Love the Big tits mature woman with the young man. I hope that there is a follow-up story.

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

GREAT STORY FIVE STARS LOVE THE BIG TITS. Dumb husband doesn’t eat her pussy not fucking her enough.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great Love Story Five Stars Lisa is a 41 Year old under fucked Milf she needs to get knocked up. Her Idiot Husband hasn’t been taking care of her and keeping her satisfied she needs her pussy ate too orgasm a couple times a day.

We need a second Chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

next part pls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sequel pls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Some of your finest work (this and Mother’s Day are neck and neck). Any chance there will be a follow up?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

How about a follow up where Logan meets some of Lisa's girlfriend's?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

yes nothing better then a horny mum have fucked a few over the years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

nothing better then fucking a cheating wife without a condom

wendy53wendy53over 1 year ago

Young guys don't wear condoms with me 😊

LoisKnight69LoisKnight6910 months ago

Never did it with any of the opponents of my kids, but did enjoy being with a couple fathers of their teammates.

During youth soccer, I would bring the kids to practice which was about an hour and a half to 2 hours long. Sometimes I would watch some of the practice and then go do some errands or shopping. I noticed other parents and some of them noticed me. At one practice a man asked if I wanted to go get some coffee and I said okay. We got the coffee, chatted and flirted a little.

At the next practice, he suggested coffee again and we took his conversion van. Instead of going inside, he went through the drive-thru and then drove into the parking lot of a nearby Mall anchored with big box stores We moved to the swivel seats in back and chatted and flirted a little more. At the back of the van was a large bench seat that flattened out. Our flirting continued and innuendo increased. We found ourselves on that large flattened bench seat.

For the rest of the season we would meet at least once a week at practice and either find a spot in a parking lot or drive to a secluded place in a nearby park. Neither his wife nor my husband was the wiser.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

First a defense of the story. Youth soccer has had more participation than youth football for almost 30 years. Second, this wasn't you f***** it was high school soccer and in most metropolitan areas it is a very big thing. So it is not unrealistic to have cheerleaders at the game nor is it unrealistic to have locker rooms at a high school where the match is being played. However it was unrealistic to have the ref till the boy he needed to go to the locker room instead of the coach.

Yeah it was unlikely that the milf was going to fall for the guy who hurt her son so quickly, but hey it's erotic fiction and it made a good story. The van sex was great, and I'm glad she got away with it without being caught. It was a great story and fun to read.

If the author wants a sequel there are several directions it can go it can be about Logan who has an afterthought takes care of the cheerleaders who are clearly enamored with him, or Logan can handle another milf - be she a friend's mom, another stranger, or a teacher at his school. Or the sequel could follow Lisa. Perhaps that night Lisa gives her husband sloppy seconds without him knowing it. All the while she was thinking of Logan. Or maybe Lisa is promiscuous at work. Another option is that having experienced young cock, Lisa now sets forth, seeking other young men.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

You should write more adventures about Lisa Reynolds.

MfkndragonMfkndragon9 months ago

So the mom is willing to ditch going to her sons game to support him in the future just to fuck the dude that ran into him who probably done it on purpose yeah she flatly betrayed her son and then flatly out lied to his face she's no mom

MfkndragonMfkndragon9 months ago

To the person who said she was glad she got away with it without being caught and to anyone else who thought this was a good story let me ask y'all what would you do or think if it was your mother who betrayed you with the guy that intentionally hurt you and then flat out lied to your face and plans on saying fuck you and your next game to go out and fuck the guy that hurt you how would you like it if your mother betrayed you

ireadliteroticaireadliterotica8 months ago

You bring a food point Mfkndragon. Although I took the story at face value

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

If there’s any story that needs a sequel it’s this one

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19818 months ago

I have to agree with mfkndragon I mean she betrayed him by fucking the dude in the car he has to ride home in and she lied

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19818 months ago

She lied to his face without any guilt she has already stated she was going to do it again and all but said to hell with her sons games in the future while sure it was never actually said but it's safe to assume just by the way the story was shaping out that he did intentionally run into and make sure he hurt her so cause it sounded like the sons team and him was basically dominating them until the injury basically this is just another story that the the mother betrayed her son and wanted to do it wanted to hurt her son while the story don't exactly say it we can also assume she's married which means she wanted to hurt and betray her family in general I personally believe if another chapter is wrote it should be in the way that she loses everything including the respect and love of her son cause it's clear she doesn't love her son

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

2 minutes of attention with some guy and she's ready to fuck him and risk her marriage? Yeah so it seems this kind of thing was inevitable if it was that easy for her. This is why it's very important to not starve your wife of attention. Of course it shouldn't be this easy to get her to fuck around, but oh well, such is life. Her husband must be really lousy in bed and basically shit in general if it takes this little to get her to turn into such a wanton slut for the cock of some guy she met for a few minutes (and one that hurt her son no less).

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

lmao why do people read cheating stories and then get mad when characters cheat? 5 stars. One of my absolute favorites. craving more

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19815 months ago

It is not the point of getting mad cause they cheated in this story people are getting upset cause she betrayed her son and lied to his face by fucking the kid that ran into him and hurt him on purpose and plans on doing it again instead of going to her sons game we also get upset cause the writer makes out the husband in most stories to be some willing cuck bitch or they believe a cuck bitch is who has a wife that cheated on them rather they knew or not when its simple a cuck is someone who knows there wife is cheating and they approve of it or who decides to take back and forgive there cheating slut but if the husband doesn't know his wife is cheating and later finds out then he divorces the slut for it that is not a cuck bitch basically if your spouse cheats divorce them like a bad habit no being nice no talking no nothing with them anymore divorce them and humiliate them and there lover make them wish they were dead that's what should be done if you are a man and you forgive your wife for cheating you are cuck bitch and deserve to die if you are a woman and forgive your husband for cheating you are a cuckquen and deserve to die

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

@PhoenixLore1981 I fucked your wife

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

@PhoenixLore1981 I also fucked your wife

MoicheiaMoicheia4 months ago

Is English your third language? Your syntax and writing style sound more like a Russian writing in English.

MoicheiaMoicheia4 months ago

Cheer up mom. Maybe both teams will meet in the playoffs this. I guess the league does not have a season schedule so that you could check.

wasagadavewasagadave4 months ago

Liked it a lot! A story like this will easily fuel the fantasies of many young men and middle aged women. All over the world, readers will be jerking and diddling themselves to climax. Well done ThatBoi21.

I'm always amazed at people who tear part fantasies. Things like, it could never happen, wrong setting, she's a slut, he's a jerk. They even like the apply their own ending to the story; divorce, violence, etc.

Meanwhile, I'm pretty sure things like this can, and do happen. The human race is capable of almost endless, "misbehaviour".

The good thing for ThatBoi21, as a writer is he's obviously got a reaction from his readers.

And my reaction is 5 STARS!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Sequel pls

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Another day, another request for a sequel

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A big cock in me is just what I need.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19813 months ago

To the anon that thinks there being funny yall wouldn't stand a chance with my wife she likes men not little boys or in y'all's case little bitch who is too much of a pussy and has to post anonymous as i write this my wife is laughing her ass off at how stupid y'all are acting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

What a supporting mother. Slut.

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

Chapter 2 - Lisa and Logan keep meeting at nearby motels and hotels, fucking each other in every position possible. During the Thanksgiving holidays, while Lisa's husband and son go hunting for a week, Lisa invites Logan to come over and stay with her. Logan and Lisa fuck each other four or five times every day. They fuck in bed every night as well as every room and closet, on the couch, on the floor, on the kitchen table, in the two showers, and in the woods behind the house. Nine months later, Lisa gives birth to twins, one baby boy and one baby girl. Over the next eight years, Logan fucks and impregnates Lisa four more times. Lisa gives birth to two more baby daughters and two more baby sons. All three of her baby sons look exactly like Logan.

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I write smut with a plot that normally isn't too deep. It's also normally about women cheating on their husbands. Hope you like my stuff, and I'm always open to suggestions and criticism.