All Comments on 'Fucked Myself Ch. 01'

Interesting concept. Being the only human DNA they can use, he has no choice but to have a female version of himself for mating. Technically it is incest, but with a sci-fi twist. I'll be looking forward to see how this series goes, and see how your rewrite for this first chapter goes as well.

I find the idea and the concept amazing. An impressive imagination. Certain things aren’t always taken into consideration and one of those is how an alien species would perceive time and distance although it is so clearly logical considering someone who has a lifespan of 1000 years wouldn’t consider 10 years to be long at all. Great job on this one.

Cool, but the shared consciousness idea makes it too depressing for me. Cause still, it's just yourself and yourself. Not an ideal situation, but I guess it's 1 step up from being truly alone. Though, I wonder what it would be like having the thought to speak a phrase coming out from the opposite genders voice of yourself and you physically hearing it back. You know how to hate hearing your own voice when you listen to a voicemail. Not enough lewdness -1. Outer space and no alien fucking -1. Overall well written +3. 3/5

As I started writing chapter 2, I realized I don't understand female emotions well enough to do the story justice. Would any women out there be willing to help a bit?