All Comments on 'Fuckin' Thanksgiving'

by The_Darkness

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Surprise ending works for me.

Good plot, well done. Ending was unexpected. Really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good and hot

i enjoyed that though it was becoming obvious what thr ending would be still got me horny for pussy

CrapolaCrapolaover 19 years ago
WTF?

Anonymous is a fucking idiot.

sacksackover 19 years ago
Baby, it's hot in here!

That was Some sex scene! You write with good erotic detail and the balance of sexual/non-sexual components was well done. Definitely worth a look-see!

carsonshepherdcarsonshepherdover 19 years ago
Hmmmm!

Nice job here. Sexy and well thought out.

Carson

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
Holy Shyte

That was excellent!!!

I love your style of writing. You steer clear of all the usual cliches... and the storyline was awesome!!!

Good stuff!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Impossible situations

Many of the positions described in this story are physically impossible! I know this a fantasy, however, impossible positions detract from the story line.

Anonymous
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