by The_Darkness
Good plot, well done. Ending was unexpected. Really enjoyed it.
i enjoyed that though it was becoming obvious what thr ending would be still got me horny for pussy
That was Some sex scene! You write with good erotic detail and the balance of sexual/non-sexual components was well done. Definitely worth a look-see!
That was excellent!!!
I love your style of writing. You steer clear of all the usual cliches... and the storyline was awesome!!!
Good stuff!! ;-)
Many of the positions described in this story are physically impossible! I know this a fantasy, however, impossible positions detract from the story line.