All Comments on 'Fucking a Witch'

A short but sweet story. Please do keep writing.

great start, would like to see more

I agree with the two previous comments, idope247, that you are no dope. Your writing looks technically and grammatically good, but your nice fantasy seemed to go too fast. Perhaps the story would have benefited by some threat or tension, nicely resolved later, such as a spell of increasing lust, or exploring possible warlock talents. The dialog seemed effective and relevant. I think you can do more! And earn higher ratings if you like.

You can wash me down first," she said, handing me a big soapy sponge.

I'd once worked at a carwash and so I was not without experience.

Same thing, smh