All Comments on 'Fucking Around on the Third Floor'

by ChimeraMirage

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Erotic Confusion!

With this story you need a scorecard to keep track of who is doing whom. If you like switching between sexual pardners at warp speed - this story for you. *Whew* Gives new meaning to the word - 'Busy!'

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
It was pretty...

...obvious from the start since you didn't mention Sam's partner's name where the story was going to end. Each of the "fuckings" - I think there were nine but I may have lost count - was described so cursorily as to be completely non-erotic.

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