by neuroparenthetical
Good premise.
Could have used much more asshole teasing. With finger/s. With mouth. With tongue.
Could have used more dialog during preliminaries. And during analingus. How was it for her? For him? Was there anything else he could do to make it better for her?
Could have used more teasing of his cock and balls.
Three stars.
Quite enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing it.
I plan on checking out more of your work.