All Comments on 'Fucking Carmel'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Average, but.....

There is NO ROOM AT ALL in literotica for birth control!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Needs lots of recostruction

Good effort, but there wasn't any detail what so ever. Also, what about the hymyn and all the pain in virginal sex for a female?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Why the degrading references to the girl?

I liked a lot about the story, especially the seduction but the last paragraph just killed it all.

_vernon_vernonalmost 15 years ago
Just who is the sex toy?

I read this just after a story by mkjames46, "Bookstore Activities" [this was one of the suggested stories after that], in which a girl carefully seduces a guy. That led me to look at this as perhaps a carefully planned seduction by the girl. Another commenter pointed out that there was no hymen and no apparent pain at the first intercourse. Also, there was the continuous bragging by the guy of how he was taking advantage of her, yet no place does he do anything that a reasonably adventurous girl wouldn't do. The author can tell us what was really happening, but it seems like she may have been the aggressor in this story.

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