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All Comments on 'Fucking for Money'

by SexyRuth

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 3 years ago

If I would have subtracted a star for every grammar, spelling and syntax error, you'd owe me about 20 stars. An editor would really help!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Agree about the grammar. It is clear English is not your first language so you really need an editor. The errors took away from.the story

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