by Jack_Fetch
shouldn't brag about it. You are one of the evil greedies
Thank you for writing this as well as writing in general. Your story revealed the characters' personalities without rambling. I love when writers can "show me" a story instead of just telling.
nice reading....it works...all the story and interest one needs, without laboured descriptions. great.
As another strip club fan, this was definitely a favorite post. (And yes... I even had my own experience of scoring a closing-time quickie with an extremely cute, blonde stripper on site... but with none of the drama of getting caught in the act!) Anyway... originally read your offering years ago, and managed to find my way back for a re-visit. A little disappointed that the most recent comment is over 7 years old... Decided to remedy that problem with this comment. Too bad there haven't been any new story posts, but sometimes the older ones leave a lasting impression.
Breaking all the rules, but hey you only live once and it wasn't like she wasn't a willing participant! A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.