All Comments on 'Fucking Magic - A Potion Problem Ch. 11'

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traskentraskenabout 2 years ago

Thank you so much for continuing! I'm enjoying this world!

ecto1d42ecto1d42almost 2 years ago

Great story! Looking forward to seeing what other little things that were in the coffee can do. That USB is pretty handy! I also love the idea of a relationship building with Samara and him and his sister. But anyway keep writing and don't let them bastards get you down!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the story and cant wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the story and cant wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I loved it overall, but I thought the name thing with the virgin oral expert was too silly and detracted from the story

It would’ve been nice to get more of a feel for the nature of the monster what was its motivation? What was it trying to gain by promoting negative emotions in the girls

It would’ve also been nice to have something left behind that showed that the monster had originally been human and due to abuse or bad life experiences has ended up in the state

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11/21/23 - Fucking Magic 15 Submitted. Hopefully in time for Thanksgiving. Part 16 is a real evolvement and is finished and half edited. The series might go to Part 18 or 17 might be really long with an Epilogue. 9/6/23 - Fucking Magic 14 submitted and coming at you in the n...