by Defluer
Great story! Looking forward to seeing what other little things that were in the coffee can do. That USB is pretty handy! I also love the idea of a relationship building with Samara and him and his sister. But anyway keep writing and don't let them bastards get you down!
I loved it overall, but I thought the name thing with the virgin oral expert was too silly and detracted from the story
It would’ve been nice to get more of a feel for the nature of the monster what was its motivation? What was it trying to gain by promoting negative emotions in the girls
It would’ve also been nice to have something left behind that showed that the monster had originally been human and due to abuse or bad life experiences has ended up in the state