All Comments on 'Fucking Mum in the Hot Tub'

by Harvey_32

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ansdguyansdguyalmost 8 years ago
Far too brief.t

This is just a cruel tease. I'm sure that you can write a longer, more satisfying chapter.

blackkat46220blackkat46220almost 8 years ago
funny

I thought the bit of humor at the end was cute. A little more interaction with mother and son would have been nice. but, all in all ... a good story...

letmein90202letmein90202almost 8 years ago
Should be under Non - Erotic

Totally clinical.

There is absolutely no erotica in the story.

You might as well describe an enema by a nurse since neither the son nor the mom were active and conscious participants in the act!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You really missed a chance of a great story. Far too short

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