by fms9612
This read like a teenage girl wrote it. Every guy was devilishly handsome. Twilight junk. Couldn’t get through it. Don’t write more.
Definitely want more..l perhaps a bit less of the non sex and a bit more detail of the sex ;)
It's not reluctance or non con if the target is drooling from the second she lays eyes on a guy. Don't know if it's a good example of whatever genre it fits in, but for this category it's not good.