All Comments on 'Fucking My Wife's Most Sexy Friend'

by anilsahotra

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reshmavreshmavover 19 years ago
wonderful

This is a wonderful and exciting story that kindless the sex feelings in any women

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Needs a lot of work....

Doesn't your country have a site for your fantasy stories? You use so many foreign connotations and language usage that we Americans or English have a hard time following your fantasy with any kind of easy meaning(s). I cannot give you a decent score because of this and would suggest to you that you do your writing in your own cultural outlet. I'm sure that is is excellent and warrants a "100", however I find it non-erotic in our Western culture.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
grammar and dialogues

the plot of the story of good but it wasn't well written....plus the dialogues were dragged.. let me tell you anil that no body enjoys dialogues like ohhhhhh jeeejuuuu pleeaassseeee ffuccckkkk meeeeee haarddd..and that also ten times in a row! anyway work on it..hope to hear a better story from you. best of luck

peace!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not good

You need an english editor.... most of your story was plain annoying by adding rrrrr aaaaaa ssss....what the hell was up with that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I agree

the story started very good, but extending the words made it hard to follow, also lapsing into your own dialect is distracting . using an editor will make your good story great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Stupidity gone wild

What a farce of a story. Wasted 3 minutes reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
nice

Nice boobs to fuck n choot to fuck. I m so hard reading this...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Cunt

Wot a load of fucking crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

damn , i feel like i really want to fuck niba , damn she's one hot babe .

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

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