All Comments on 'Fucking Sisters for Power Ch. 01'

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YaBoiBigChungus7YaBoiBigChungus78 months ago

This is definitely an interesting take and a great story i cant wait to see more if this story

getthephenomgetthephenom8 months ago

Great start. Can't wait to see, how the story progresses.

muskyboymuskyboy8 months ago

I would have given a higher rating with some backstory....

ScottishTexanScottishTexan8 months ago

This could have easily been a lot better if you hadn’t invoked the H-Cup breasts and Ten inch dick trope. Unless you're shooting for writing a comedy story instead of a Science Fiction story, that bullshit tends to ruin the tale. You're already pushing the boundaries with the whole Superman/Wonderwoman genre, so why be ridiculous unless you are trying to be a comedian. 🤔

Interesting concept poorly executed. 2/5

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Incest enjoyer. Jennie Kim's boyfriend. Having fun writing erotica. "If i die do not unfollow me because i will be back." Happy New Year, ya'll. Here's to hoping this year will be a better one :) Was plannin' to release the Christmas story around Christmas, but life had othe...