by Sessared
This is definitely an interesting take and a great story i cant wait to see more if this story
This could have easily been a lot better if you hadn’t invoked the H-Cup breasts and Ten inch dick trope. Unless you're shooting for writing a comedy story instead of a Science Fiction story, that bullshit tends to ruin the tale. You're already pushing the boundaries with the whole Superman/Wonderwoman genre, so why be ridiculous unless you are trying to be a comedian. 🤔
Interesting concept poorly executed. 2/5