by katienight
Yes it is erotic if you like that sort of thing. But it was just as well written as your other stories. It's good to try different things. And besides whatever floats your boat right? Keep the stories coming.
No this was a major departure from your other work. Too nasty too dirty. Absolutely no feelings except anger. Much prefer your other work
It was definitely well written, but I think your talents are better served in the lesbian section. Although, that is only my opinion.
It hits the male mindset right on the head. How some men see women as something to be used and abused. While also telling them what they want instead of respecting them as equals. The female character emulated what men want every woman to be but a weak woman is a broken women, personally I don't find that attractive. I took a chance reading this story vs. your lesbian section and now I'm turned off. I'll give credit where it's due the story is well written and well edited.