All Comments on 'Fulfilling Fantasies'

You just couldn't get it over and done with quickly enough, could you!

What was it? Five minutes writing time whilst your mother was out of the room?

Next time use some imagination and try to build some empathy into your writing. Not just "wham, bang, thank you mam", but try to create real characters to whom your readers can relate!

The phrase that comes to mind. This skirts the edge of a slippery slope. AbUse. It is hard to think this is the same hand that wrote wonderful '06 tales when I see the '09 subs. There are some male pre-Neanderthals that make similar subs and probably a few fems. I avoid if poss. I had you in a diff class. Almost regret earlier plaudits. A woman writing such gives cerebral excuses to the above mentioned. Risky even if we had an un-sexist perfect globe. .. Erotica fan. Male