by HeyAll
As always, thank you for reading. I hope you've enjoyed it. Be well, everyone.
heyall
Honestly, these guys got a bargain. She needs better negotiating skills.
Very well done...unusual circumstances, her viewpoint was described perfectly, never breaking character. I would be quite interested in reading more about her, or another woman of the same type. All in all...one of the most well done stories I've every read. As a side note, I'm probably old enough to set at that table (though my blue jeans would never be accepted :-0 _) and by the end of the story I had a physical reaction...for that I thank you ....
I'm kind of š„ sad heyall you've been one of my favorites for years but I feel like a stranger is writing your stories lately...the sex scene was 12 sentence from son entering mom to them cuming. Where is the sensuality, the connection, the description.
What happened? Those stories were good, had nice build up, nice teasing, nice fluid exchanging... we miss that old Heyall, it was a brand name.. will we ever get that Heyall back?
Wow! Iāve never read a story quite like this one before. I wasnāt really sure where it was going, but as the story line proceeded, so did I! I thoroughly enjoyed it as I have all your submissions. Thanks!
Like all your stories very well done and thanks for the comments at the end they all can use the help
Great story. I have read most of your stories and admire how you build tension into them. Sometimes, anticipation is better that actual happening. With you, both are great.
A most unusual, provocative story. You know how to take this genre in new directions.
Very well done . Now that mother and son have bonded like this what changes will happen for them ? Once you have tasted the forbidden fruit it is difficult to not want more . Thanks for sharing.
Normally not into latacting stories but you make them
Exciting and interesting.
Hope you plan to continue this with Matthew and his
Mom, having to give these men some more shows
With additional pre-excersises.
Plus Mathew in his new job. Thanks for writing.
they get home. Have her knocked up and her son taught everything about sex and love.
<strong>Good story</strong>
Good story. But I like it may involve love among mother and son.
No explanation as to how she is lactating when her son is 18 years old. That could make for good reading.
Like another commenter , I thought this story strange , emotionless , nearly clinical , in the beginning . And if it wasnāt for the subtle hints , such as the blushing with the maid , I would have retained the same opinion . But as the story progressed and drew me in , albeit from a distance , kind of like a peeping Tom , I began to see the genius in it . It was such a unique plot , and the characters personalities had depth and brought interesting situations into play . All in all it was a wonderful short that I feel lucky to have stumbled across ! Great job from an obviously gifted storyteller
"I'll pay an extra $200,000 right now. I want both of you to drink from the cups, then kiss each other. Then I want Sophie to get on her knees and pour some milk on Matthew's cock before sucking it. Then I want Sophie bent over this table, with Matthew pouring milk in his mother's pussy for lubrication before fucking her."
This is the most hottest part of the story and every sons dreem
Iāve tasted breast milk a few times and love this story. Hope thereās more.
Tit milk can get all over the place when you're fucking someone with boobs full of it. No big deal, you just need to wash your sheets often.
The visualization of this story was great. Hope to read more like this filled with graphic details.
I think you have a good concept here -- have you considered extending it, with Sophie and Matthew encountering more situations?
My wife made it available to me for four years after our son was born, This story filled with taboo and perversion. I loved every word of it. I gave her orgasms sucking her breasts.
This is one that I can read over and over again. Iād really like to see another chapter to this. Great story!
The words flowed easily from one paragraph into the next and the plot is imaginative ... very much in the "magical realism" style of writers such as Gabriel Garcia Marquez or Salman Rushdie.
Mother/son stories really get to me. Itās a concept I donāt really have perhaps because I have no children. I find it hot though
Wowā¦there one I didnāt expectā¦but it was an erotic one..really got the sperms moving!
Very erotic story ,
Thanks for this..ā letās have some more!!
I thought the scene of rich men watching in isolation was inspired from Squid Games, but damn, this is before that!
Great job Author.
GREAT Story! Best ever. Suburb writing style. Comment: Never did explain how she was able to lactate and I never knew that cum was chunky . . .
Absolutely the best. Just reread this story and am pleased to say that the arousal quotient was every bit as evident as I previously commented.