All Comments on 'Full Moon- A Twilight Story'

You nailed the characters from the series. I felt bad for Jacob, though...very much like in the books. The sex scenes worked very, very well (I especially liked Jacob and Edward briefly arguing during!). Thanks for writing this.

You really did do quite well with the characters. I can't wait to read the next installment!

Great use of the characters. Very sexy as well.

please please please write another!

I loved the series, and loved your story.

I absolutely loved your story. You were able to capture the characters so well right down to Emmett's teasing. You kept me wanting more. I hope you will continue along and make a series. While I absolutely love Twilight it should prove interesting to see a new spin on it. Please say that you will consider continuing on.

oh my well i def agree. yuh connected eveything so well.. im def a team jacob girl myself. =] plz continue i wanna know if she gets to do it again =]

so is she pregnant or not? i want an answer. but i felt emotional reading this, good job. i'm team edward so it was interesting. good job though!

They could've used artificial insemination, you know. They're living in the modern world already so there's no reason why they couldn't have used that method. Besides that, the story was alright overall.

the last part was quite dumb! edward would lose a match against jacob

This story had so many possibilities!! Why end it like that??? Come on now! If you read any of the books you know she was turned on by Jacob! Argh

I see you never read the books OMG BELLA LOVED JAKE even thoiugh she loved and picked Edward

edward there was creepy... not good. AT ALL

I thought Edward was so in character throughout the story. He will do absolutely anything for Bella, Yes, it was a little unconventional, but she's married to a vampire and best friends with a werewolf. So pretty much everything surrounding her is highly unconventional. Jacob was spot on as well. He is her best friend. And best friends always try to be there for one another. I understood why Edward felt he needed to be there, and he would especially insist on it if Carlisle thought there may be a risk of Jacob shifting into his wolf form.

All in all, I thought the story was very interesting and quite plausible given the unique nature of the world of Twilight. Please don't let one idiot who is to cowardly to send their name along with scornful, an unhelpful critique make you stop writing this fic, or others similar to it.

Thank you for posting this!

-Sara G

That was great it matched the series please write more I'll be watching . Thanks for taking the time to write it

I didn't think this would be that intense! I think it would have gone better if Edward and Bella fooled around until she was ready while having Jacob watch and then he come in and finish the job. Can't wait to see what happens next. This is a total favorite of mine now.

I wish the sex scene with Jake was longer, but this was a decent read