All Comments on 'Fun in the Gym'

I love this story. Its descriptive and sexy with out being smutty and vulgar.

Please Please PLEASE be horny enough to do it all over again tomorrow!

Another Winner!

Have read 3 Julesteve stories and they have all 3 been pure, unadulterated, concentrated HEAT!

Off to go read more.

This is the first of your stories I've read - unless I find a reason not to, I plan to read them chronologically, as they were posted.

I sense a woman who will have some good stories to share. I expect your skill to get better as your writing experience grows. So far, I won't vote because I don't believe in giving low scores.

A couple suggestions: Please don't make all your stories narratives. Give us some conversation!

Give your characters names. Tell us enough about them that we can like them.

Get your facts in order. First three guys enter, then she's faced with five cocks? Either these guys belong in a side show, or I missed something.

I'm not trying to be harsh with you; as I said, something tells me your writing will improve.

Gary13

sexy exhibtion to release in a gym for Group of strangers

Loved the graphic nature of the interaction - from reserved to satisfaction for all! Well written for a first story!