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I've had an appreciation for women of Persian descent since my college days at Michigan State. Some of the most breathtakingly gorgeous coeds I encountered were, I learned, either Iranian immigrants or children of Iranian immigrants. To this day, I can still remember many of the beautiful Iranian girls I met there. I hope you'll continue writing, but I'd also like to point out, responding to your opening paragraph, that if you write well, you'll attract fewer "haters". And even negative comments can teach you how to write better.