All Comments on 'Fun on the Train'

*sigh* It’s highly improbable but damn who cares that was so hot!

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

5 Stars. More please.

Well worn theme, but not a bad little fantasy all the same. You spoiled the read by putting it in the present tense. Writers on Lit do this but it’s difficult to write successfully and uncomfortable to read.

No worry of disease? Does not make a lot of sense.

This is a terrific fantasy! Pay no attention to your critics- it's fun, erotic and quite well written.