All Comments on 'Fun Run with Boss's Daughter'

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Anonymousabout 4 years ago

You have some grammar issues but solid story.

UltimateHomeBody about 4 years ago

Reads like this is a chapter in a series? If so then tell readers this.

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

OMG

his cock had to be 8 inchs! lol But good story

Anonymousover 2 years ago

It would have been so much better if his cock was 27" long, 13" in circumference, while she somehow took it with ease as he came in thousands of gallons. It would make this tale so much more believable. See what I did there?

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