All Comments on 'Fun with My Sister'

Good first chapter (if that). Needs more depth details and plot to be a story.

What I really liked was the thorough description and development of their personality, feelings and relationship so that we were able to understand where this breaking a major taboo came from ...

Left me cold.

Needed more meat what's going on and why are both characters willing to cross the line

Very poorly written. I think the author never finished fourth grade.