All Comments on 'Fun with Rachel'

The fastest fuck I have read in months but enjoyable .The silence helped make it different.

Well, darn!. Your almost there with a hot story, now this is your first so I won't be hard on you. If you could hold off the ending or a slower start of your next story, you may get a star from your peers.

Well, darn!. Your almost there with a hot story, now this is your first so I won't be hard on you. If you could hold off the ending or a slower start of your next story, you may get a star from your peers.

but I sure look forward to more adventures with rachael in the future. There's a few tiny errors in the story but nothing major. I would also avoid using words like a 'smelly' pussy and a 'dirty' load of cum. Otherwise it was a great first story and thanks for the read.

i loved this...wishing i was your daughter!

NICE STORY.WISH IT WAS A BIT LONGER.

Nice writting. A bit of a twist with no screaming and such. A nice touch. And probably how it happens in real life. You should have told us that this is your dream for your real step-daughter. She's probably a bit young to be fucked by her daddy, but not too young to jack off to, is she.:-) Maybe in a few years when she grows up, you'll be able to write about how your cock took her cherry. Of course you'll have to find time to be alone with her so she can scream as you fill that tight virgin pussy with your cock and then shoot your load of cum deep inside her.

reminds me of my step daughter have been sniffing her panties and having fantasies for a couple of years now. Not managed to fuck her yet but had some close calls, i think she wants it as she keeps rubbing against me on our couch

Is this really fiction? Wish I could get it on with my stepdaughter, cant get beyond the fantasy stage. Please write more.

I got off to this story picturing an older friend of mine that I wish would just fuck the shit out of me.

I wish I had a sex step dad that can fuck me that way.

Yes I can relate to this story.

Yet at 19 she's calling him 'Daddy'?

Also, try doing some proof-reading.

I thought your story was real good, I really enjoyed it. I hope you dont put a lot of thought into what other people say, just keep writing and keep enjoying writing.

i too started fucking my daughter when she was 19(she's 38 now) it started off innocently like this but it was something we both wanted and needed and have continued now for all there years,funny how a daughter can be you lover and life long companion.

i hope you write a follow up story to this for its was a great. looking forward to seeing another story

made me so damn wet..

Very Tight