by Priapus
I've been hanging in with this hot, yet improbable saga for 9 chapters (b-t-w, how about entitling Chapter 2 with a #2?) and have been getting somewhat bored waiting for some fucking....At last the sweet Elena got some; but not to cum? Hmmm.. Maybe in Chapter 10. Some bi-guy stuff as a change of pace would be fun too -- there's almost too much gal-gal stuff already.
I don't care for all the current genre of shaving. I love full jumgle bush and appreciate the discussion of the two apparently wild bushes in this story. I also liked the story of the deflowering. It seemed more believable than the usual 'ram it in' type story. All in all this was a great story.