by justincbenedict
Only a sicko would write a story about dominating someone AND the person that they plan to marry. Pathetic.
like ass w/o a name. Just go away you sick fucking freak! None of us are impressed with your ravings!
This was not a very good story. Anytime you have someone contiuously torture some one just because they can is not what BDSM is about. It is about reaching sexual enlightment by letting go of your own inhabitions without feeling guilt because someone else is in control. YOU REALLY NEED A HUG!
I'm going to be less harsh than the other commenters. The torture isn't a problem itself. The problem is that's all there is. Stories need some balance to the torture. It needs to demonstrate the intimacy and lust/love that keeps the sub there (or some reason why it's involuntary if that's your thing). Without that it loses something ... including some realism.
I’d love to experience some kicks to the groin once in a a while by pepper