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I gasped. No, I couldn't. Why would she slip off? Wasn't I good enough? I thought I was. She even said she loved me. It was the most affectionate my daughter had ever been. This bruised pain throbbed across my heart.
Then the doorbell rang.
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis is a great series but the sex scenes are getting to be too much. When that is all one is reading and there is not plot it really doesn't become erotic but desensitized. They also run a little long. However, that being said, your descriptions of the sex scenes are amazing!!! You paint a vivid picture in one's mind when writing these! I'm not criticizing this because it is a fantastic story line. I have never written a story on here and don't plan too so that tells you something. Hopefully the next chapter will have more seduction and a plot as I think it is leading to that. Great writing and please keep.going!!
