by CrescentRose
Captivating! I love how Diana turned the tables on Lauren. That futa cock torture was exquisite.
That was a bit scary. Jeeeess I sort of liked it. And that scared me more. I don't mind what happened in Futa Queen, but WOW this was a bit over the top for me. I do hope you keep writing these characters. Maybe find someone to love Diana and she love her.
I LIKED Futa Queen, which I’ve read immediately before this story, and enjoyed reading this one as well. All good futa stories are weird with just the right amount of fantasy and ridiculousness and these two fit in well.
BOTH STORYLINES could be used in non futa stories with a few alterations which is always a good indication as to whether something is good or bad. Both had me smiling in what I considered the right places.
I THOUGHT the description of Lauren’s permanent punishment was a bit gross and I don’t think it fitted in with the rest of the story/your writing. In my opinion, I’m sure you could have come up with a punishment which would have been more in common with Diana’s character as you have written her. Other than that, well done.