All Comments on 'Futanari Fun'

by SaiShadow

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hidden953hidden953over 12 years ago
love it plz con't

it has great potential !

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love it!

Good story so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

pace yourself a bit its all happening a bit to fast

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
need more

I would have given more stars but need to have more story this was just a teas

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great beginning

I wish you wrote for this more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Your off to a good start.

I have read quite a few futanari stories on this website. You started off kind of fast. But not to the point where it's ridiculously fast. Try to slow it down a little bit and get more explanation and more detail and make the chapters longer and I'd say you'd have a pretty decent thing going here. But so far I would give it a two star or two and a half stars to be nice to you. Good work try to keep it up.

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