by SaiShadow
I have read quite a few futanari stories on this website. You started off kind of fast. But not to the point where it's ridiculously fast. Try to slow it down a little bit and get more explanation and more detail and make the chapters longer and I'd say you'd have a pretty decent thing going here. But so far I would give it a two star or two and a half stars to be nice to you. Good work try to keep it up.
I would have given more stars but need to have more story this was just a teas