All Comments on 'Futanari Notebook Ch. 17'

Fantastic as usual. I love this story even though I didn't like what happened this chapter. I knew megan couldn't change that quickly but I still had hope that she wouldn't be such a terror to Zoey. That hope went out the window. That was horrible what she did and I hope Zoey gets revenge on her. I have faith that you will make everything work out in the end for carmen and her friends. I of all people understand that most people are vicious assholes but good lord there are almost no good people in this story. But again I love this story and I have faith that you will make everything right in the end (and some goddamn sex scenes eventually but you do you).

Her sister revealing her secret to the entire world like that kinda felt a little forced/without enough supporting evidence, so to speak, to make it feel entirely natural. Especially not when she had started turning over a new leaf. I get that old habits die hard sometimes, but that still felt like a bit of sudden 180° as she was pretty damn sincere in her consideration of her sisters feelings just a few paragraphs before.